Read the poem below:
Lost in a place
That doesn't seem to care
So old and bleak
The rain beats down
The winter is haunting
It chilled to the bone
Darkness cocoons* me
As the light shines in
Warming my soul
*cocoons- covers over
Write a comment about the poem, completing the following questions:
1. What do you think this poem is about? Why?
2. What is your favourite line in this poem?
2. Give the poem a title that fits with the mood of the poem.
Please write your name at the end of your comment.
31 comments:
1. I think this poem is about someone who is very lonely.
2. My favourite line in the poem is 'darkness cocoons me' because I like the idea of being safe and warm in the dark.
3. I think a good title for this poem is: Please Help
Ms Mayes
1. I think this poem is about someone who is very lonely and has nowhere to go.
2. My favourite line is 'darkness cocoons me' because I like the idea of being safe in the dark.
3. I think a good tltle for this poem is: Friends Please?
Ms Mayes
1. i think this poem is about someone very depressed probably sleeps on the streets
2. my favourite line is " the witer is haunting" because it seems relly real and makes me shiver when i read it
3. "lost"
1. i think the poem is about being trapped in a dark place.
2.My favourite line is 'lost in a place' because it brings the reader straight in.
3.The title i would give this is: TRAPPED!
Joshua Eldridge xxx
1.I think this poam is about a lonely person who is upset.
2.My favourite line is when it says:As the light shines in
warming my soul.
3.I think the poam should be called Sad And Lonely.
That Last One Was From Lauren Doyle.
(sorry about that)
Lost in a place
That doesn't seem to care
So old and bleak
it seems he/she islost and does not have know one to care for him/her is lonley and has where to go
it sad and it feels that your lost
over all i think the poem is lonley and lost and sad. mohamed
8D
i think poem is about a trap and the world cant eaccept him .
Hiyaa :)
1. I think this poem is about someone lost by themselves at night in the rain.
2. I like the line 'darkness cocoons me'
3.I think it should be called: Darkness
Thank you
Love Jane ;)
Hiyaa :)
1. I think the poem is about someone who is lost alone in the dark.
2. I like the line 'Darkness cocoons me'.
3. I think the poem should be called darkness
1.My opinion of this story is there is somebody who doesnt know where he is or why he is there.
2.My favourite line in this poem is "lost in a place" because the person who has written this doesnt tell you were this somebody so it gives you more to think about.
3."where am i" because you have no idea where you are.The name is joe.
1.My opinion about this poem is that its somebody who doesnt know were he is or why he is there.
2.My favourite line in this poem is "lost in a place because the writer does not give any clues abot were this somebody is/
3.this poem should be called "where am i" because you have know idea where you are.
MY NAME IS JOE!!!:)
hellooooo
1. i think its about a person who is feeling down and has no one to turn to.
2.my fave line is lost in a place that dosnt seem to care.
3. it should be called light and dark
a tramp thats fallen down a well
As the light shines in Warming my soul
down a hole
MAX
From reading this poem I feel the poem is based on someone or somthing who is alone in life and has know where to go.
secondly, the poem i have selected my favourite line which was warming my soul reason being, i thought it perfectly which gave a good effect.
To conclude,i strongly belevie the poem should be called no way to turn or no way out i feel this tittle will present great effect.i also feel these tittles are eye catching.
From Andre Francis 8D
From reading this poem I feel the poem is based on someone or somthing who is alone in life and has know where to go.
secondly, the poem line i have selected as my favourite line was warming my soul reason being, i thought it perfectly which gave a good effect.
To conclude,i strongly belevie the poem should be called no way to turn or no way out i feel this tittle will present great effect.i also feel these tittles are eye catching.
From Andre Francis 8D
1. i think the poem is about a very lonley person who has nowhere to go and no place to live!
2.my favouite line is warming my soul it feels as if when the sun shines on him he feel happy and his soul feels nice and warm
3.i think the poem should be called lonley!!
from samiya ayiaz 8D
1...I think this poem is a about a tramp and he doesnt have any where to live +he is very lonely
2..."It chilled to the bone"
3...lonely
ONGUN!!!
1...I think this poem is a about a tramp and he doesnt have any where to live +he is very lonely
2..."It chilled to the bone"
3...lonely
ONGUN!!!
I think this poem is about someone that is left out and put to the side.
My favourite line is: *as the light shines warming my soul.
A good name for it is Lonely.
By Ali. C 8D
1. I think it is about someone who is deressed, because he is looking at everything in a gloomy way.
2.The winter is haunting.
3.'DARKNESS'.
1. I think the poem is about someone who is depressed, because he is noticing all the gloom in the world.
2. My favourite line is "the winter is haunting" because I think this is an accurate phrase.
3. 'Lost in the rain'
Archie Barber
1. I think the poem is about someone who is depressed, because he is noticing all the gloom in the world.
2. My favourite line is "the winter is haunting" because I think this is an accurate phrase.
3. 'Lost in the rain'
Archie Barber
1. I think the poem is about someone who is depressed, because he is noticing all the gloom in the world.
2. My favourite line is "the winter is haunting" because I think this is an accurate phrase.
3. 'Lost in the rain'
Archie Barber
1. I think the poem is about someone who is depressed, because he is noticing all the gloom in the world.
2. My favourite line is "the winter is haunting" because I think this is an accurate phrase.
3. 'Lost in the rain'
Archie Barber
1. I think the poem is about someone who is depressed, because he is noticing all the gloom in the world.
2. My favourite line is "the winter is haunting" because I think this is an accurate phrase.
3. 'Lost in the rain'
Archie Barber
1. it is kinda lonely
2. it fell lonley
1. its very lonely
2. it looks hard for him
izmir. 8d
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